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Sample Sunday 46

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Here is approximately 100 – 150 words from a randomly selected original piece for your enjoyment. These samples can include excerpts from my all my WIPs and my Eternal Curse Series, but only as works in progress (not the final products). These samples of published and unpublished works are protected under the U.S. Copyright agreement.

It’s Like the Full Moon chapter 4.2 (wip)

She rushed through the door and accidentally slammed it behind her. “I’m up, I’m up, sorry won’t sleep in late again,” said Lisa pulling the covers from her body and trying to stand up.

“Oh Lisa, I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to do that,” said Rebecca sweetly. “It must have been an awful draft,”

“You sure about that,” asked Lisa still a bit shaken up. “Cause I’m up if you want me to be up.”

“Really, I am sorry Lisa, but it’s good that you’re up.”

“Why’s that good,” asked Lisa, yawning into one hand and scratching her head with the other.

“It’s good because it’s going to take you at least an hour to get yourself dressed and ready for the tour and by then it will be lunch time.”

“Oh yeah, I mean yay hooray…the tour; guess I’d better get ready.”

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Review: Cinder

Cinder (Lunar Chronicles, book 1) by Marissa Meyer

I give this book a 4.

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Cinder is just as the book and cover suggests, a futuristic retelling of the classic Cinderella story, but there is the brink of a great space war looming in the background. It tells the story of a cyborg teen, a mechanic, commonly referred to as Cinder. There is a mean stepmother and stepsister, but there is also a nice stepsister. There is also a scary plague and some crazy curfews and rules about life as a cyborg. So when Cinder has a chance encounter with the charming Prince Kai, the last thing she wants is for anyone to know about it, especially not him. No one can know that the Prince has associated with a cyborg peasant, but before long, that’s the least of Cinder’s worries.

I’m a fan of fairy tales and all their retellings, so it would have to take quite a bit for me not to like this story, but even with my own personal bias, I think this is a really good story. It is very creative and imaginative. I think what I like most about the story is that Cinder isn’t presented as just another girl. I know she’s a cyborg, but she’ll still a person. What I mean is that, deep down, in most Cinderella stories the girl really does want to go to the ball and dance with the prince and have butterflies flutter across the sky, but that’s not Cinder. Her youth is gone and she has too much else on her mind to even think about the ball, but that doesn’t mean she hasn’t wasted a few moments thinking about how cute the prince is.

Then there is the matter of the plague, the threat of war, and the moon people. I was very impressed with the way the multiple conflicts mingled in this story. The whole idea of the traditional love story is almost put on the back burner as the rest of the story takes over. I unfortunately have read too many books and seen to many movies to be kept in the dark about Cinder’s greatest secret. I figured it out pretty quickly, but I was still impressed with how it came together. I have a feeling there will be more action in the follow-up story, simply based on the amount of intrigue and conflict in this one. Needless to say, I’m looking forward to continuing this story.

This review has been posted to GoodReads.

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Character Files from the ToiBox 60: Mr. Thornton -Preferences

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Subject FM 5-Mr. Thornton

Favorite Color: unknown

Favorite Food: biscuits (cookies)

Favorite Book or Movie: Love Affair

Favorite Music: opera and rock’n roll era music

Favorite Pastime: travelling

Character Analysis: Loves good conversation and being sociable, even if it’s not as easy as it used to be.

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