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Sample Sunday 52: FULL MOON

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Here is approximately 100 – 150 words from a randomly selected original piece for your enjoyment. These samples can include excerpts from my all my WIPs and my Eternal Curse Series, but only as works in progress (not the final products). These samples of published and unpublished works are protected under the U.S. Copyright agreement.

It’s Like the Full Moon- chapter 4.4 (wip)

Before Rebecca realized it, she and Paul had reached the village where the inn was and soon they would be in their warm dry rooms preparing for dinner. The sky had clouded up and it looked as though rain was eminent, but they didn’t rush back to the inn. They’d walked a long way and knew the end was near; they were okay with catching a few droplets if it came down to it. Just a few feet from the entrance of the inn, standing under an old street lamp Rebecca turned to Paul and smiled at him. “I can’t believe I’m saying this, but thank you. I had a really wonderful day.”

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Sample Sunday 49: FULL MOON

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Here is approximately 100 – 150 words from a randomly selected original piece for your enjoyment. These samples can include excerpts from my all my WIPs and my Eternal Curse Series, but only as works in progress (not the final products). These samples of published and unpublished works are protected under the U.S. Copyright agreement.

It’s Like the Full Moon chapter 4.3 (wip)

The Thorntons, Lisa, and Rebecca didn’t bother fighting with the crowd. They waited for the front to fill up and took the much roomier seats at the back that didn’t have such a wide and clear view. “Do worry about looking out the windows,” said Mr. Thornton, “We’ll see all the good stuff when we get out.” He was right. The bus ride seemed to be somewhat troublesome to the dozens of touristy sheep piling over themselves trying to take mostly failed scenic photos as the bus bumped and jumped around every corner and rolled over every crevice. The enjoyment of the bumpy ride was only appreciated by the small rowdy group at the back of the bus; they told silly stories and laughed each time someone dropped something as a result of the buses rush.

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Review: Insurgent

Insurgent (Divergent, book 2) by Veronica Roth

I give this book a 5.

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I thought there would be more action in this one and there was…Oh and I was right about those crazy factions and their downfall and all that. Now I can’t wait to see what’s outside, but I’m getting ahead of myself.

Tris is at it again, being all sweet and moody and kick-butt all at once. I like this kid, but she has some serious issues. Four on the other hand doesn’t seem as wise and mature as the author projects him to be in the eyes of all the other characters, but I still like him too (He’s only two years older than Tris, not exactly a father figure).

So in this book we’ve figured out that all the smart people are trying take out all the selfless people and somehow everyone is just now acknowledging the sixth faction, which I was just waiting for all along. There aren’t a lot of surprises in this plot, but I like the way it is executed. The author has put ingenuity to test with the way she’s twisted her plotlines. The few surprises there are in this book, are more than enough to carry the rest of the story if anyone is having a problem there.

The whole theme of control (and mind control) in the book screams anti authority in some ways, but I also think it’s a cautionary tale about the problems with too much control. Apparently someone tried to create a perfect world that’s slowly falling apart and people are willing to kill to keep this failed idea a secret. I admit I have questions about where this story is going, but I was too wrapped up in the mental and physical battle between Tris and the Erudite to spend too much time worry about them.

If the first book was about keeping secrets and finding yourself, then this one is about revealing secrets and testing yourself (finding out if you are who you think you really are). I could say more, but there’s no point. I like this book whether it makes sense or not, and I can’t wait to read the next one.

See my review for Divergent here.

This review has been posted to GoodReads. If you’d like to obtain a copy of this book, try this link.

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