Familia Bond
Danube
This has been the most cheerful harvest in recent history, with cool days and clear nights. I was put in charge of my first field this Spring and have worked more and harder than I have in years past, finally understanding pride in a job well done. I never before understood putting so much care into food I’d never eat.
As the youngest, male Field Leader in over a century, the anticipation of tonight’s celebration has me on edge, in the best possible way. I’m so honored to be able to attend the formal this year. Being around so many prestigious female leaders will surely increase my chances of establishing a pair-bond, especially if the Harvest Celebration goes as well as planned.
For decades, I’ve imagined the grandeur, etiquette, and politics of the Harvest Celebration, knowing how important it is to our survival. I should have been able to take part in the celebration many times over- I’ve been of the proper age for some time now, but the attendance of the celebration has been restricted as of late. As Josiah puts it, “The balancing of a population is a delicate endeavor. No matter how great our harvest may be, without good numbers, it mostly goes to waste.” I have been fortunate to have Josiah looking after me all these years and am even more grateful for a chance to repay his guidance and education.
I and two others, another male and a female, were sent out to dwell among the citizens to help influence them and protect them from their own ignorance. For a score, we blended into their society and corrected their assumptions, improved their methods, and fortified their medicines and rations. With our help, the citizens have thrived. In the Spring of this year, we were all called home to take charge of fields and prepare for harvest time. This will be the first Harvest Celebration in over a decade with an attendance that reaches beyond the capacity of our Great Hall. We don’t know the exact number of the population, it’s not our way to interfere directly with the citizens, but desperate times called for desperate measures. Now, we’re all highly anticipating the arrival of the citizens to the Harvest Celebration.
Milsa
Tonight is the night. I have been preparing for this, it seems an eon. Year after year, I’ve attended the celebration, but being the youngest of the elders, I’ve always missed my opportunity to choose a pair. The citizens’ numbers have been so low that there were never any descent Chosen left to present by the end. Not this year though.
I’ve heard wonderful reports from the citizen spies. The citizens are healthier than ever, and their numbers have almost doubled. Josiah was wise to restrict the invitation to the celebration this last score. He will be the savior of us all if this Harvest Celebration is the success we all hope it will be.
It’s foolish really, but the anticipation of this Harvest Celebration makes me feel like a girl again. It’s been so long since I was a mere girl, but even one such as myself does not forget that feeling of excitement, that thrill of mating and reproduction. I know I’m ready for tonight’s ceremony.
After the other citizens have departed with their bounty, our gift to the locals for their sacrifice, the Field Leaders will mesmerize their chosen progeny and then drain them to the brink of death. The other Elders and I will then choose, in ranking order, the Leaders and progeny we deem worthy of the Familia Bond. I will select a young, strong male who has chosen to present a daughter. I will feed his chosen progeny from my wrist and then I shall drink from his heart to replenish my own strength. The servants will clean our bodies, drape us in silk, and bury us together under the harvest moon.
Tonight is the night I finally obtain the family I’ve longed for, for far too long.
Josiah
Oh, this burden I’ve taken on, this great struggle to perpetuate our species has finally begun to lift. My plan to send out our youngest day walkers has served us well. Many disputed my decision, refusing to take in the severity of the problem. It is true the Vmpyrs have never directly interfered with the lives of the humans, the citizens of this land, but if they are to continue serving as our breeding ground, we could not afford to stand by and let them die from starvation, famine, and plague.
My decision to restrict the invitation to the Harvest Celebration was also unpopular. When an elder, female Vmpyrs is ready for the Familia Bond, she’s ready. Convincing the Elder clans to alternate the years in which their females could choose new pairs and progeny almost cost me my life. An angry Vmpyra can easily withstand the charge of ten Vmpyro, no matter how old or well-trained they are. Vmpyra live for the day they can start the Familia Bond, but with the humans’ numbers dwindling so, there just weren’t any new progeny available.
I myself had given up the prospect of presenting a progeny at the Celebration for the past decade to ensure that others would have a chance. But I am happy to have a chance to participate this year. My favorite and most talented pupil, Danube, has blessed us with a great report of the citizen’s health and numbers. Tonight, he and I will stand before the elders and finally have our chance at eternal bliss. I know Danube has longed for a daughter; perhaps I shall present a son.
I regret now that I once looked down on the Familia Bond, thinking an eternity as a bachelor was the bliss I wanted. After being a bachelor Vympyro for more than three hundred years, I deserve to have the Familia Bond.
This will indeed be the best Harvest Celebration ever.
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FCA- 994-words- Familia Bond 2019 Copyright © Toinette J. Thomas
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46 replies on “Horrible Harvest #WEPFF Challenge featuring Familia Bond #amwriting #flashfiction”
Disturbing on multiple levels. One is of course the straightforward fantasy/horror dark world of the vampires. But what spooked me out even more was that it blurred the lines – this could equally be our real world. Danube, Milsa, Josiah could well be actual human characters the way things are shaping. Well crafted and an engaging read.
Thank you for your contribution to the WEP Challenge.
Thanks for that feedback. I wanted to portray vampires in a very human way. I often think that vampires are so popular due to the parts of humanity they lack. In this day and age, sadly, humans are begining to seem more vampiric.
Hi,
The story intrigued me. At first, I didn’t see that it was a vampire story. it started dawning on me when I read Milsa’s story. Engaging and you also built the tension up, keeping me reading until the end.
Very well written.
Shalom aleichem,
Pat G
Thanks, Pat. I was trying to portray them as more human than monster, even though that’s what they are. I’m glad it seems I pull that off.
That did NOT go as I expected! Love it!!
Your stories never fail to surprise and entertain 🙂
So glad you enjoyed it. I was worried it would weird most readers out, but that’s also acceptable for this challenge.
This is a scary story on multiple levels. I guess, in our multifaceted lives, what is beneficial for some might be anathema to others.
Exactly. It’s kind of messed up, but it’s also the balance of life and death.
I thought I had commented (but it seems not).
Wow. This is nasty. And compelling. I love the blurred line between a human reality and a fantasy. Both have nightmares built in.
Yes. I wanted to write something that had more elements of realism before the fantasy elements took over. Glad it worked.
Sorry your comment got stuck in peding approval. It shouldn’t have done that.
A nice way to think how an event can affect so many people.
Thank you. It’s what came to mind, even though I tried really hard to come up with something else. In the end, though, I like what I came up with.
You did an excellent job with this tale! These creatures, while dark and scary, also feel human and relatable in their concerns. It makes sense that they would need to ensure the survival of humans to ensure their own survival. Self-serving, yes, but we humans don’t exactly have the moral high ground to complain about selfishness.
Well done!
Thank you, LG. Self-serving is just what I was going for, but also that touch of humanity as well. These creatures are not wholely good or bad, they just want to survive.
I liked the skilful way you drew me in, so that at first it made sense and then, with dawning horror I read on. Well done
Thank you. I’m glad you liked it.
What a great story made even better by wonderful writing.
Sally, I really appreciate those kind words. I know I have creativity in me, but being part of WEP is what has made me a better writer. It’s good to know I’m improving every day.
A fabulous take on the prompt. And I agree with you that people are becoming much more like vampires, very detached and self-serving.
~Cie~
Glad you liked where I took the prompt. It took a while for me to appreciate it, and now I’m glad I didn’t fight it.
Solid writing. More please! Is this going to be book length?
Thanks, Dixie. I don’t have any plans to develop it more right now, but I never say never.
This could be humans and not vampires. At first thought it would be some humans pretending to be gods and taking advantage of others, which many do these days, ugg. Very well written and showing a different side to vampires.
Thank you Pat. I was trying to make them seem more human than monster. I may try to explore the idea of humans being gods another time.
Toi, I love your take on vampires. Mine are very human and many humans act like vampires. It’s a wonderful genre where we, the writer, can create any sort of scenario and who says it can’t happen? Vampires sure have many facets, but it is the idea of the way they feel about losing their humanity that intrigues me. A great entry for the prompt.
Thank you Denise. I was hoping that you’d appreciate it. I know you love vampires. I’m glad you like my take on them.
A frightening read more so because I can see this in many people today!
Yes, I wanted to show how many people live self-serving lives by portraying the vampires in a very human way.
I liked the way the ‘horror’ builds from what could be a traditional harvest festival. And it comes over as justified and reasonable – not ‘horrible’ if you twist your logic. Clever, Toi.
Thank you. It’s the more human elements of these monsters that’s really the horrible part. Glad you found it clever.
I liked reading the three perspectives. And nice twist!
Thank you.
A fabulous take on vampires… I loved the reveal too. At first I thought it was regular humans.
Thank you. I was worried the reveal came too early or too late but it seems to have come off just right.
Hi Toi – what a great story … the three stories being brought into today’s world … really well written – cheers Hilary
Thanks. Glad you liked it.
Thank you Toi. Chilling Harvest festival. I loved the way you use the three point of views to build up the suspense and reveal the horror of the situation. Congratulations . My apologies for the late comment. Finally figured out how to access this page. Have a great Halloween. See you on Wednesday for the November IWSG post.
Sorry you had trouble accessing my page. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. See you on IWSG Day.
Good Morning Toi,
Congratulations on the comment badge award.
Wishing you all the best and a successful week.
Shalom aleichem,
Pat G
Thank you, Pat. I hadn’t even seen the announcement yet.
I really enjoyed these submissions.
And my congratulations. As a previous winner I know commenting is a great help.
It’s part of the whole experience. I enjoy it.
Congratulations Toi on commenting on all the other entries … it’s frustrating at times, when one can’t connect – but oh so necessary for those we are able to find – cheers Hilary
Thank you. I always try to leave comments, especially since I appreciate it when I get them.
I was so engrossed in the story that it took me a minute to realize that the story was about vampires.
LaToya
(Toya’s Tales)
Thank you. I like when I’m able to surprise someone. Thanks for reading it.