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Antique Vase #WEPFF Challenge featuring Even I Know #amwriting #flashfiction

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Even I Know

Silvia was the best, but even I know, the best things never last. I bet her funeral was lovely if the reception afterward was any indication. I was so pleased to be placed front and center as family and friends entered to sign the memory book. I didn’t much care to be filled with Styrofoam, but at least the silk Lilies were a nice touch. Many of the guests even rubbed my brass handles. I wondered how many of them thought they’d have a chance to take me home.

In the end, though, I was just as shocked as the rest of the family when Silvia bequeath me to her irreverent granddaughter. It took less than a week for her to seek an appraisal and then sell me off to a gallery. While I tried to enjoy the prestige and glamour of my new home, even I know when trouble is on the way.

When I first came to the gallery, I was placed in Regina’s, the curator’s, office while she decided whether to keep me for esthetic enrichment or sell me to the highest bidder. From the moment she saw me, she knew there was something more to me than my antique status and my brass and ebony inlay. Within thirty days, her revenues had increased fifteen percent. That’s when I was granted my own tinted glass display case, just outside the reach of direct sunlight, but in clear view of all who visited the gallery. I even gained a golden nameplate letting all interested parties know that I was not for sale.

Another month later, the first of Silvia’s relatives arrived to make an offer on me, explaining my long history and connection to their family. Regina was not moved and did not consider their offer. Still, more of them came and each time they appeared more desperate. Finally, the granddaughter herself arrived, offering twice was she’d received for me to get me back.

When the curator turned her down, security was called to keep her from trying to break my display case and carry me off. She yelled and kicked and screamed. “You don’t understand. It belongs with my family. We won’t make it without it. Please, we need that vase!” The next day, the curator took me to her summer home on an island to which even I’m unsure of the exact location.

From that point forward, my days were a blur of sunrises and sunsets. Nestled between teacups and similar tribal art, no one ever came to visit, and no one got to see my pretty designs. Regina was definitely not the best, but at least she kept me safe. At least until her wealth got the best of her. Even I know that someone like Regina is likely to be her own demise. I believe I heard the movers say it was an over-weighted private jet that eventually took her down.

Then came Marley, a half-brother Regina never mentioned to other people. He sold off her entire estate and moved to a wildlife reserve in Hawaii. I have no idea why he kept me. Perhaps he knew how special I was.

I was not excited about my new home at first, but in time I grew to appreciate the low-key atmosphere. I was on display next to the guest sign-in book at the resort adjacent to the reserve, which Marley apparently owned. I liked being filled with glass pebbles and silk Tulips. I felt very secure, just out of reach for small children but easily admired by discerning adults checking in and out. Within a few weeks, all the animals and staff were healthier than ever, and more guests were staying at the resort and spreading the word about the great work Marley was doing. It was a lovely time of peace and prosperity.

Then one day, Silvia’s granddaughter showed up. She did not look well. She wandered around the lobby and stopped and stared when she saw me. Her skin appeared stretched across her bones and her lips cracked with dryness as she shuffled towards me. When the desk clerk saw her, he immediately ran to her and asked if she needed help, calling to a co-worker to bring water. In an instant, she reached out her hand to grab me. When she missed, just barely grazing the tips of her fingers across my brass base, she collapsed to the floor.

A month later, Marley placed me in the center of a small round table and invited all his friends and family to gather around me. He told them all how special I was and that he’d drawn up a will to make sure I always remained in the family. It was a nice gesture and made me feel loved and appreciated for all the prosperity I bring with me everywhere I go.

Still, even I know that a will and good intentions only last for so many generations.

~

Updated 4-21-20 to address some typos. 

FCA- 828 words- Even I Know 2020 Copyright © Toinette J. Thomas

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By Toi Thomas

Author and illustrator of children's books, as well as clean adult fiction and nonfiction. Toi is a geek-girl blogger, vlogger, reviewer, and advocate for a healthy reading lifestyle. She finds comfort in faith, family, and creative expression. Toi believes in the dream of world harmony and hopes all your dreams come true.

46 replies on “Antique Vase #WEPFF Challenge featuring Even I Know #amwriting #flashfiction”

I thought this was a great post. My entry has some similarity to yours in that we are following the vase in it’s progression through various human lives. In mine, the vase is always handled in the third person. In yours, the vase has found its own voice. Beautiful!

Your post brings to mind a debate I had with a friend years ago about whether objects have karma. I am also reminded of how archeologists use pottery to date digs because they are fragile and rarely remain intact for longer than a generation.

What also comes to mind is Donovan’s song Happiness Runs:

Little pebble upon the sand
Now you’re lying here in my hand
How many years
Have you been here?

Little human upon the sand
From where I’m lying
Here in your hand
You to me are but a passing breeze

: ^]

Your voice comes across with warmth and is rich with wisdom–the timbre of an old soul. Thank you for the post!

I used to be very cautious about lending my things to other people because I don’t think other people take care of things that don’t belong to them (this after a former-friend returned a dress
stained). I’m not materialistic, but do believe that you should take care of the things you have.

Toi, I love how you used the voice of the vase to tell its story. I’m intrigued by the family who needed it so much to the point of collapse! A charming life for this vase. I wonder, as does the vase, what the future holds?
Thanks for participating with such a great story for ANTIQUE VASE. Thoroughly enjoyable.

I hope you’re keeping well, Toi.

The vase came into the family with the now deceased grandmother. I know so many examples of families falling apart after a matriarch or a patriarch passes. I decided to add that, along with an element of good luck, to the vase and developed my story from there.

I found your story intriguing. In that how you treat even inanimate objects can come back to haunt you! And what better object than a vase. Having been in the family for so long how could it not absorb the love or hate that resided there. Very well done!

Thank you. I decided to show the dynamics of generational decisions through the vase and then decided the vase should have an opinion on things…
Corrected a typo 4/18 at 1:13 ET.

Hi Toi – gosh I’m quite glad I don’t have one of those vases as part of my family … and then it having a few generations with one family, before life taking over and needing to move on to a new family – then the travels it decides to make. Clever – well done – all the best Hilary

I don’t think the vase is the bearer of bad luck, just good luck. If the vase is no longer around, its former owners begin to see how different their lives are without so much good luck. It’s meant to represent relationships and how often people don’t realize how good they have it. It’s about being content… Still, I’m glad you liked it.

This was a wonderful story! I enjoyed the way we traveled along with the vase and saw how it impacted the lives of everyone around it. That granddaughter certainly had no idea what she was doing when she sold it. Well done!

Yes, the grandaughter passed on a great blessing to get a quick payday. I intentionally only gave names to the characters who figured out or knew the vase’s true purpose.

Hi,
I liked the your vivid imagination. A vase that can feel and see down the ages. Beautifully told your story has lots of wisdom to live by in it.
Excellent.
Shalom aleichem,
Pat g

Thank you. I thought writing about family dynamics from an objects point of view might not make it seem so sad. Plus, it allowed me to add a sense of hope.

Writing from the point of view of the vase was very inspired. I truly enjoyed this story!
~cie from team netherworld~

Thank you. I think of the vase as that person or relative who waits around for people to come by and visit. The ones who don’t visit don’t get her blessings.

Oh, brilliant! Not only from the perspective of the vase, but we can be left to wonder if the vase knows its own power. Aside from a couple of typos, I don’t think I’d change a thing.

Thank you. If you stop by again, let me know what the typos are and I’ll fix them. My editor’s eye goes blind when it comes to my own work.

I love that you wrote from the pov of the vase. That really makes this special! It’s great how the vase knows it is special, but that even good fortune can become a curse. Really great way to present this story!

“an island to which even I’m and sure of the” I think you meant unsure, not and sure. If you ever publish this, that’s a tiny typo to fix up on this otherwise amazing gem!

Love that image, Toi – and then the POV as soon as I read ‘filled with Styrofoam’. Craft hints as the ‘adventure’ unfolded – ‘something more to me’ as well as that word ‘trouble’. Love the way you wrote this flash – mix or suspense, humour, and fantastical. Sad too. Certainly special.

Excellent take on the prompt, and am totally awed by the choice of the POV! Brilliantly done!

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