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Character Files EC: GA Files EC: Giovanni's Angel

Character Files from the ToiBox 79: Mira- Opinion of Peers

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How does this character feel about his/her book peers?

Subject EC:GA 4-Mira:

…is still getting used to Leo, unsure of what it is he actually does.

…adores Abraham and clings to him as the father she’s never had.

…feels sorry for Giovanni and realizes that in order to help him, she needs to stop.

…is terrified of Bletsian, if he actually exists. She’s not fully convinced that he isn’t some story Giovanni tells just to scare her.

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Full Moon Sample Sundays

Sample Sunday 64: FULL MOON

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Here is approximately 100 – 150 words from a randomly selected original piece for your enjoyment. These samples can include excerpts from my all my WIPs and my Eternal Curse Series, but only as works in progress (not the final products). These samples of published and unpublished works are protected under the U.S. Copyright agreement.

It’s Like the Full Moon- chapter 6.0 (wip)

Teddy’s driving into town to meet a friend for lunch at a dinner, but he can’t seem to stay off his phone. He thinks he’s more ready for Rebecca’s wedding than anyone else because the whole ordeal is driving him crazy. As much as he hates to use his Bluetooth, he’s found that it’s been his only saving grace getting him through his days, trying to get things done for himself, while constantly listening to orders and directions from his mother and sister.

Teddy: Becca do we have to talk about this now? I mean, I’m going to see you tonight, right?

Rebecca: Yes Teddy, but I know you won’t remember. If we don’t talk about it now, you’ll be useless later when it comes time to discuss it with everyone else around.

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Review: The Guardian’s Apprentice

The Guardian’s Apprentice (Beyond the Veil, book 1) by J. Michael Radcliffe

I give this book a 4, almost a 4 ½, but I’m sticking with a 4.

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Keegan Whitestone just found out he is descendent from wizards, which he thinks is a horrible thing, but he soon realizes that it’s just a part of life and he needs to suck it up. Besides, it’s not like his old life was all that great anyway.

This is classic high-fantasy and I like it.

The reasons I didn’t give this a higher rating are:

1. Keegan is a little annoying throughout the whole book. I grew to like him more as the story progressed, but I still found that all the other characters in story were more interesting than him, by the end.

2. The depiction of time felt off to me. There were times when it took some rereading for me to figure out whether a little or a lot of time had passed in between scenes.

3. The whole idea of Keegan’s power overtaking him also seemed a little off to me. He may all of sudden become powerful enough to defeat his enemies, but then he’s told to control himself and hold back. I’m still trying to decide if that’s a necessary subplot or just annoying.

Overall, though, I really enjoyed the story and will be reading more from this series.

This review has been posted to GoodReads. If you’d like to obtain a copy of this book, try this link.

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